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-----SCRIPT----- Panel 1: Yagura's eye. Panel 2: Dyamond's eye. Panel 3: Yagura: Hey, are you okay? You look a little zoned out... Panel 4: Dyamond: *He looks so calm and relaxed* No... It's nothing... Something... Something seems different about you... *So different... He never tells me anything.* Panel 5: Dyamond: Anyways, I'm gonna leave, I shouldn't have been here... Yagura: NO! I insist, don't go! Panel 6: Yagura: Please, don't go! Dyamond: Yagura, let go. I'll stay just let go. -----END----- Some romance, worried, and humor was added into this. I told you I would chill on the skin color. Tried to make them a little lighter. It came out better. This took me a week, cause I had a busy schedule, so a few stops here and there on this page. The last panel is too funny x3. Lol. As you can see, I'm trying to do more detail, not too much, or else I bet you won't get any pages from me! Lol. The shading seems to have come out better. This is going to be a long chapter, and the last chapter until we get to the UPDATED SERIES! If you didn't know, UPDATED SERIES to me means a few years later, or somethin' and everything has changed. And then the story really begins. This is just an intro, if you will. Don't forget that * thos asterisk, or stars means what the person is thinking in their head! ~Kadijah Sang 2009 I own GCD. Guardian Crozz Drive. Pg 5: [link] Pg 7: Coming Soon. |
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Be true with yourself
Its up to us to spread our wings
Motivation is how you start, habit is how you continue
There is more to relationships then the ecstasy of the flesh and body
Commit to a promise
~Kadijah
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Naruto VS Sasuke
Naruto: Harem Jutsu!
Sasuke:Ugh, eww get off of me. I hate chicks, I'm gay!
Naruto:...
Sakura:...
Sasuke:..
Sakura: I'm always there for you baby!
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Be true with yourself
Its up to us to spread our wings
Motivation is how you start, habit is how you continue
There is more to relationships then the ecstasy of the flesh and body
Commit to a promise
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Spongebob Dating Sim...wait wait! Just...just think about it...
I don't mean to come off sounding like an ass, but this series could use some serious padding. I'm trying to follow some kind of storyline here, and I can't get any coherency out of it. It needs more dialogue, and probably some kind of explanation before the story starts to explain whats going on. Sort of like a prologue.
I see lots of potential here, but in all honesty, you need a bit of practice in story telling. I kind of see what you are doing, dropping us into the middle of the action, then going back to explain it, but there's not enough detail. It doesn't have to be Shakespeare, or however you spell it, but it needs some kind of explanation as to whats going on. All I see is fights, insults, and private moments so far.
That's the end of my constructive critiscism. Please don't bomb me.
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Blood is a good source of iron!
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